Friday, July 30, 2021

HOLIDAY recount

In the school holiday's I had my birthday and then I went to my friends house Boston after that I went Home to go with my mum to the ware house. get me and my brother's some stuff after we got our stuff we Went to the check out but when we were. going to pay for all of our stuff my mum didint have enough Money for it then I gave her my money to pay but we needed 10 more dollars for our. drink's then the Lady gave it for free then we went home and waited for every one to come then 10 minute's later every One came to have dinner after. all that we had cake then I went to my mate's to stay there for the night Then started playing on the PlayStation later that night we all fell a sleep.


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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 3, 2021 at 9:44 AM

    hi old frend keep it up OK by...

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  2. AnonymousAugust 17, 2021 at 12:06 PM

    Hi it is me Venn, please try to add more detail and tell us how you got there and what you did at Bostons house. What did you and your brother get at the Warehouse?

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  3. AnonymousAugust 17, 2021 at 12:14 PM

    Hi my name is Ngawai. Maybe try to add more detail and tell us how you got there and what you did at Bostons house? How much money did you get when you were at The Warehouse?

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  4. AnonymousAugust 17, 2021 at 12:15 PM

    kia ora Irie my name is Arnez I really like you holiday recount where did you have your birthday? This reminded me when I had my birthday

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  5. AnonymousAugust 17, 2021 at 12:20 PM

    Hi it's Jerome. Happy birthday Irie. I like your spelling but you should shorten it down a little bit and try putting some full stops in there and capital letters.

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  6. AnonymousAugust 17, 2021 at 1:24 PM

    Hi my name is William. Maybe try to add more detail in your writing next time.

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